His design is pretty crap
he's obviously not considered building it or paying for it.
couple of points, your roof is nearly identical to mine.
are you sure you can use osb under the metal roof, the screws are really small and the pull out strength in osb is poor, I thought they said it needed to be plywood or solid timber.
we went with knauf omni fit between the rafters and 70mm pir board underneath.
ditch the insulated plasterboard and use a service batten then fit normal plasterboard.