I like the guaranteed airtightness results you get with the likes of MBC and the whole superstructure being the responsibility of one entity. If something does not work out on site or BC pull you up, you know who needs to get it sorted.
Red would be foul, blue surface. You would need to divert them if they are near the proposed building. Don't assume they are near where the drawings indicate. They may be fairly deep.
Bear in mind that the planners often want you to be able to go in and out in a forward gear, so you will need space on site for turning. You may do well to extend the driveway / parking areas.
It may be better to have the rafter insulation extending full length of the rafters instead of insulating the dwarf walls and part of the ceilings below. 30mm of insulation under the rafters is also good and will help eliminate any condensation / damp potential.
If your written deadline has expired I suggest you issue proceedings for recovery of the £3,000 plus court fees.
You can do this online, although it is a bit tedious. https://www.gov.uk/make-court-claim-for-money/make-claim