You have about a mile of pipe in the floor. I don't like it when the runs back to manifold are tightly spaced. Can any of the pipes go under the walls?
Unless you select the battens yourself, this is about standard. Often massive knots, twisted, bent, soaking wet. Sometimes I get a pack delivered and they are all perfect.
Well spotted. Not terrible but you are paying for a proper job. Tell them to redo it. No fun onsite welding but if they priced for it they should do it properly.
Would it be possible to dig down to the foundation following the line of the vertical crack on the left to see where it starts and if the crack runs through the footing?
This is a base level DPC. As long as it prevent water rising up the wall it has done the job. Chopping out bricks in sections just sounds silly. This is not halfway up the building where it will possibly allow water into the wall below, it is at ground level, where it will soak harmlessly into the ground.