floor plan advice

[Bluebaron]

My planning has been knocked back for the second time due basically to size. I'm now falling back on a 3 floor design that my designer originally suggested but i rejected. I don't like the dormer at the back so i've ditched the single storey rear kitchen and gone 2 storey. I've also ditched the garage and brought the left side down to one storey to give an extra downstairs room. (this was the main planning issue, to imposing)

 

I've attached my designers early plan and my 'very' rough ideas but wondered if anyone could suggest something better before I ask him to do the same.

 

Also to note a separate issue i can't go any further to the left or right although slight movement back may be allowed. (but not the left single storey).

 

first photo shows rejected plan

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks everyone.

 

 

 

 

[ProDave]

That's a big compromise from what you want.  Have you considered appealing the refusal?

[ETC]

56 minutes ago, ProDave said:

That's a big compromise from what you want.  Have you considered appealing the refusal?

Or change your designer?

[ETC]

Just now, ETC said:

Or change your designer?

Or lower your expectations?

[Bluebaron]

1 hour ago, ProDave said:

That's a big compromise from what you want.  Have you considered appealing the refusal?

It’s on appeal now but doesn’t look hopeful so trying to get ahead with a redesign.

 

[Bluebaron]

7 minutes ago, ETC said:

Or change your designer?

Well I’ve spent £4k on him already so don’t want to start from scratch. I’m hoping he will just amend this plan for a reasonable amount.

[Mr Punter]

If you post up the reasons for refusal it may help.

[ETC]

Did I not do a sketch for you and post it last December?