Critique please! New Build Floorplans

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Change of clothes. Simplified for rural Scotland. Other elevations to follow.

@Iceverge

@hinge and bracket

[CharlieKLP]

It is very long though isn't it! I think you do need to break it up a bit unless that's essential. Love the little design touches though.

[CharlieKLP]

Also, I don’t know how anyone can design without seeing the context, it’s so tricky.

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2 hours ago, CharlieKLP said:

It is very long though isn't it!

Not  really - it’s a “long house”.😉
 

I think you do need to break it up a bit unless that's essential.

”Long house”

 

Love the little design touches though. 
Needs something contemporary.

 

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1 hour ago, CharlieKLP said:

Also, I don’t know how anyone can design without seeing the context, it’s so tricky.

Completely agree - just a notional sketch.

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1 hour ago, CharlieKLP said:

Also, I don’t know how anyone can design without seeing the context, it’s so tricky.

Forgot to say - feel free to post your option @CharlieKLP-I’d love to see another option.

[CharlieKLP]

I don't think you can do better than your first one, even just as a notional sketch.

 

However, its down to the client, and the context. What are you after @hinge and bracket? 

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1 hour ago, CharlieKLP said:

I don't think you can do better than your first one, even just as a notional sketch.

 

However, its down to the client, and the context. What are you after @hinge and bracket? 

Don’t be shy @CharlieKLP😉 sharpen that pencil and let’s see what you can do.